Post by fabiana on May 1, 2006 18:10:11 GMT -5
OK so I'm posting a new fan fiction that I'm writing tell me what you think:
Title: Something new...
Summary: Mark's arrival takes some side effects on Meredith; will this be enough to bring back Derek and Meredith?
Chapter 1: fight, dream and sleep
Meredith heard a lot of noises coming from the break room. She went inside to check it out, and saw Derek and mark beating the crap out of each other and Addison in the corner, yelling:
"Stop it Derek, you're hurting him!".
After seeing this little exchange between them, she decided to take some action, so she grabbed Derek by the arm and sat him down in the corner, while Addison checked up on Mark.
"Yeah, go back to your slutty mistress"
This seemed to be enough to make Derek explode all over again, going back to hit him
"Aren't you supoused to do something?" Meredith asked Addison
"Like what?"
"Geez, I don't know... like stopping them?"
"Mark, that's enough!"
Mark stopped fighting, and Addison approached them and helped Mark. Derek was stunt that his wife, soon to be ex-wife after this little incident, choose her former lover instead of him. Meredith noticed how banged up he was so she decided to offer her help.
"You need a hand?"
she asked while he touched his face and when he saw the blood on his hand, he let her help him.
"You'll probably need stiches"
she commented after checking his face. He had calmed down a bit after Addison and Mark had left a few moments ago.
"Can you make them invisible?"
he asked teasingly
"Sorry, but I can make Bailey or Burke do them for you"
"God no, I trust you more than I'll ever trust them"
"I should say thanks"
"You should"
"But I won't"
she said and he flashed her one of his McDreamy smiles, that one that makes her weak at the knees every single time.
"You know? that's why they call you McDreamy"
"Really? I thought it was for my good ass"
"Yeah, that also helps"
she looks at him lovingly expecting to find something in his eyes that could give her a clue if he was also feeling little butterflies in his stomach. And when she found it, she had to step away, to stop this before it got to far.
"I'll go get a suture kit"
"Mer..."
But she was already on her way to the supply closet to get the kit. On her way back she bumped into Christina:
"What's up mer?"
"McDreamy and McSteamy fought"
"Who you got?"
She starts walking away and then she turns and simply states:
"McDreamy"
Title: Something new...
Summary: Mark's arrival takes some side effects on Meredith; will this be enough to bring back Derek and Meredith?
Chapter 1: fight, dream and sleep
Meredith heard a lot of noises coming from the break room. She went inside to check it out, and saw Derek and mark beating the crap out of each other and Addison in the corner, yelling:
"Stop it Derek, you're hurting him!".
After seeing this little exchange between them, she decided to take some action, so she grabbed Derek by the arm and sat him down in the corner, while Addison checked up on Mark.
"Yeah, go back to your slutty mistress"
This seemed to be enough to make Derek explode all over again, going back to hit him
"Aren't you supoused to do something?" Meredith asked Addison
"Like what?"
"Geez, I don't know... like stopping them?"
"Mark, that's enough!"
Mark stopped fighting, and Addison approached them and helped Mark. Derek was stunt that his wife, soon to be ex-wife after this little incident, choose her former lover instead of him. Meredith noticed how banged up he was so she decided to offer her help.
"You need a hand?"
she asked while he touched his face and when he saw the blood on his hand, he let her help him.
"You'll probably need stiches"
she commented after checking his face. He had calmed down a bit after Addison and Mark had left a few moments ago.
"Can you make them invisible?"
he asked teasingly
"Sorry, but I can make Bailey or Burke do them for you"
"God no, I trust you more than I'll ever trust them"
"I should say thanks"
"You should"
"But I won't"
she said and he flashed her one of his McDreamy smiles, that one that makes her weak at the knees every single time.
"You know? that's why they call you McDreamy"
"Really? I thought it was for my good ass"
"Yeah, that also helps"
she looks at him lovingly expecting to find something in his eyes that could give her a clue if he was also feeling little butterflies in his stomach. And when she found it, she had to step away, to stop this before it got to far.
"I'll go get a suture kit"
"Mer..."
But she was already on her way to the supply closet to get the kit. On her way back she bumped into Christina:
"What's up mer?"
"McDreamy and McSteamy fought"
"Who you got?"
She starts walking away and then she turns and simply states:
"McDreamy"